Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Thesis - Boko Haram in Nigeria
Over the past few years Boko Haram turned into a more prominent threat, using violence and tactics to scare the citizens, thereby giving them more power and creating more turmoil in Nigeria forcing the country to take action to regain control and create a stable environment once again.
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This is a very strong thesis. There are a few things although. You should mention something about your section on the international community's actions. Also, there is some awkward wording when you read it aloud.
ReplyDeleteNice thesis, but maybe change "over the past few years Boko Haram turned into a more prominent threat", to, "over the past few years Boko Haram has turned in to a more prominent threat".
ReplyDeleteYou're on the right track. Be sure to specify the time period under consideration and the geo-political context that allowed for the emergence of BH. Also, consider the influence of the international community on this (seemingly) domestic issue.
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