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Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Thesis- Tibet
The changes in Tibet after 1950, which was when the first liberation armies were stationed in Tibet, affected Tibet in a negative fashion political by belittling their government voice and questioning their long time religious traditions.
Don't forget to address the solution in the thesis since it is part of the paper. Also I think that you should change political to politically. Maybe you should also add an s after government.
Good question, I think that you hit two major aspects, the government and religious traditions, but can you include other ways in which the liberation armies affected Tibet? For example, social consequences.
You are on the right track and have addressed the political & historical issues faced by Tibet. However, you also need to consider (and address in your thesis) this issue in the present (i.e. news survey) and the impact on the international community.
Don't forget to address the solution in the thesis since it is part of the paper. Also I think that you should change political to politically. Maybe you should also add an s after government.
ReplyDeleteGood question, I think that you hit two major aspects, the government and religious traditions, but can you include other ways in which the liberation armies affected Tibet? For example, social consequences.
ReplyDeleteYou are on the right track and have addressed the political & historical issues faced by Tibet. However, you also need to consider (and address in your thesis) this issue in the present (i.e. news survey) and the impact on the international community.
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