Egypt has history with chaos from the Mubarak regime, although now unrest in Egypt is largely caused by Islamists trying to establish a larger role in the community, and the prejudice the government has toward the Muslim Brotherhood, which has led toward many tragic events.
I think that you could add a little more into your thesis. It would be helpful to have one more thing to support, it may be hard to come up with enough information to support your thesis.
ReplyDeleteYou should be more specific in your thesis and expand more so that your essay will be easier to write.
ReplyDeleteWhat time period are you considering - only the period since Mubarak or will you delve into the rule of the Mubarak regime? What is the role of the international community in these events? What is the current status of Egypt?
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